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Into the Me
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:59:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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look into the mirror i cant recognize
the strange disarray portrayed in my eyes
a feeling of doubt and loss of control
a question that lingers within my soul
great strands of black fall over my face
as i wait far beyond without a trace
here all alone, kneeling at my bed
with a gun in my hand and a hole in my head
nothing i say could help you see
through all the you and into the me
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2005-10-12 12:59:45]
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Re: Into the Me
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by weepingprophet on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 02:45:55 PM AEST
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i felt this.
~me, i'm someone else just staggering through the storm~weepingprophet |
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Re: Into the Me
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by hoist1atca on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:07:54 PM AEST
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Good Write-
Sometimes we forget thoes around us and see only ourselves-
A gun is not an answer to the problems-
It is mearly the beginning-
Joe |
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Re: Into the Me
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by guiltycircles on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 04:00:48 AM AEST
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| awesome, i love the last line... |
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