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Bliss
Contributed by
ManInTheMask
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:37:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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She smiles…stars can’t compare,
I can not help but stop and stare.
Creeps across her face, before you know,
Your mesmerised by a warming glow.
Gaze into her eye’s ever so deep,
Even the ocean can not compete.
In control, yet so weak,
Our eyes lock tight when they meet.
Lips of silk so it seems,
the sort of thing only in dreams.
Luscious and soft, creamy and smooth,
so breath taking paralysed to move.
In each others arms cuddled tight,
A burning love almost impossible to fight.
Not letting go, nor wanting to leave,
Feeling so safe as she gently breathes.
Seeing her so happy, smiling bright,
Beaming in the chill of the night.
Leaving after the final kiss,
I walk off smiling in pure bliss.
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ManInTheMask
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2005-10-12 12:37:51]
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Re: Bliss
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by O7NeVeS on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:39:54 PM AEST
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| Wow...that was just a beautiful write!! I really enjoyed reading this. Tanya |
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Re: Bliss
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 02:08:00 PM AEST
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I think you would melt the heart of the woman you wrote this about if she were to read it. Beautiful !
Michelle |
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Re: Bliss
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 08:16:50 PM AEST
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| Oh god...the lyrics to an emo song... |
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Re: Bliss
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by ManInTheMask on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 10:12:29 AM AEST
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Who's Emo =S
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