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Thy sorrow is the key to thy cage.
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:27:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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To you, who upon thy forehead bound, find thorn and sweat to be thy only crown,
and kneel downtrodden to kiss thy lovers hand, know that thy love will be the abandonment of love.
And know also that thy place will mount high upon this world, and that thy dread love, thrashed and rent asunder, will one day take claim and lift thy heart above,
to abolish; yet somehow, let pass, thy grief.
It is in thy suffering, thy long days of pain, when surely thine eyes will fill with sleep and crush against thy heart, that love will take its place.
Falter not in thy sorrow, for thy sorrow is the key to thy cage, and thy cage holds captive sudden tears that, in thy darkest hour, take flight, and carry thy dreams, and set loose upon the shadows of the night, thy love.
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iodinelove
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2005-10-12 03:27:18]
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Re: Thy sorrow is the key to thy cage.
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 04:44:20 AM AEST
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Wow. You comand your words well. If it is not done, it is close. Your words speak truth, with great beauty.
Well done, I give you utmost praise.
Take care.
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Re: Thy sorrow is the key to thy cage.
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 05:28:07 AM AEST
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Hi there,
This is a very thought provoking write.
huggs,
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Re: Thy sorrow is the key to thy cage.
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by subgenius on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 10:42:08 AM AEST
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| I like the almost. "Old English" style of writing. It really helps bring your message out. |
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