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BLUEBEARD'S WOMAN

Contributed by robertdavidson on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 02:06:47 AM in AEST
Topic: fictional



BLUEBEARD is a famous French folk-tale about a man who has murdered six of his wives. In most version Bluebeard's seventh wife is rescued in the nick of time by her two brothers. In my version BLUEBEARD'S WOMAN, she neatly resolves her dilemma in her own unique way.

BLUEBEARD'S WOMAN

by ROBERT DAVIDSON

Bluebeard's Woman. Don't open that door.
Don't open that door, your husband said, whatever you do.
Bluebeard's Woman. Don't ever ask - that key no more.
Don't be tempted to have your own way - or forever you'll rue.

Bluebeard's Woman. Don't open that door.
Because you never know what horrors you'll find inside.
Bluebeard's Woman. Don't ever ask - that key no more.
Such ghastly deeds - before you became his sweet seventh bride.

Bluebeard's Woman. Don't open that door.
Temptation is the way he plays his wicked little game.
Bluebeard's Woman. Don't ever ask - that key no more.
Disobey him? Rebel? If you do you'll never be the same.

Bluebeard's Woman. Don't open that door.
Don't open that door, we beg of you, whatever you do.
Bluebeard's Woman. Don't ever ask - that key no more.
Your brothers won't ever get here in time to save you.

Bluebeard's Woman? She opened that door!
'Cause woman today won't obey - nor let no man deceive her.
Bluebeard's Woman. Found all the bones that covered the floor.
Six former wives. Cut up in neat pieces with a meat cleaver.

Bluebeard's Woman. She opened that door.
Now her husband's coming home to kill her as we feared.
Bluebeard's Woman. She had such courage at her core.
She wrestled for his knife, kicked his balls, then sliced off his beard.




Copyright © robertdavidson ... [ 2005-10-12 02:06:47]
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Re: BLUEBEARD'S WOMAN (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 07:25:57 AM AEST
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Well guess he want be called bluebeard again.
Very funny.
huggs, big smiles,
emy


Re: BLUEBEARD'S WOMAN (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 09:00:36 PM AEST
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Awesome I think I like your version alot more, lol. The lady sure knows how to look out for herself. Always a pleasure to read your work. Time and time again you can always produce an interesting write to keep your reader captivated from start to finish. Well done.
*hugs*
Sue


Re: BLUEBEARD'S WOMAN (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 04:05:56 AM AEST
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Great job... You gave the story of Bluebeard a unique twist...Likes it alot. Keep up the good work.




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