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Midnight Song
Contributed by
wizard
on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 11:25:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
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If upon the night I stood
You're the one, the one I would
Seek to find if I only could
And hold you all night long
On your neck a gentle kiss
As you moan in such sweet bliss
Not a move would be amiss
As we sing our midnight song
Across your body my lips would glide
All your curves would be my guide
I couldn't stop if I tried
Your passion much too strong
Through your eyes I'd find your soul
And take it on my midnight stroll
Once again our love would roll
And at last we'd belong
However soon our meeting ends
Still for you my heart contends
Our love again the moon suspends
This love cannot be wrong
Copyright ©
wizard
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2005-10-11 23:25:17]
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Re: Midnight Song
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 11:46:15 PM AEST
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Hey, what d'ya know...look at the topic ; )
This is a sexy, yet loving write, and the stuff dreams are made of. Hehe. Creative rhyme scheme! That last stanza, I absolutely love.
Scorp. |
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Re: Midnight Song
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 11:49:22 PM AEST
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| This is good. I like the flowing music-like rhythim to this poem. Great write. |
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Re: Midnight Song
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:29:31 AM AEST
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I've missed reading your work so much. You can always produce an outstanding poem time and time again. A romantically beauitful and captivating write. Well done.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: Midnight Song
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:51:49 AM AEST
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Very creative and beautiful
well done |
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Re: Midnight Song
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by brew on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:33:20 AM AEST
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Always a pleasure, to read the writes, that capture, your warming, thoughts.! Wonderful, love write.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Midnight Song
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 02:16:06 AM AEST
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yea bro...
well written...3 and 1 composition-
love it.
B |
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Re: Midnight Song
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 10th February 2006 @ 08:18:34 PM AEST
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Well, my, my, my !! How did I let this one slip by me? I AM
glad I chanced upon it this night. After having viewed the
moon and all . . . *wink* This is beautiful, Paul and very
sensuous. I loved it completely !!
~Breezy |
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