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Cactus Candy
Contributed by
mangos
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:18:33 PM in AEST
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Find out what it was
That shot through your ears
And made you see visions of me
Take that momentum
And apply it to your warped philosophies
What do you get when you take away the ability to breathe
An open-mind, which doesn’t mind, to think things through, in real amounts of time
Tell me what it was that finally made you see
Tell me what it was that made you mine
That created you to be
Sweet like freshly picked cactus candy
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2005-10-11 22:18:33]
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Re: Cactus Candy
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:55:45 PM AEST
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Hmmm...cactus candy...doesn't sound like something they'd sell in your part of the world: )
This is perfectly bitter. Mind if I send it to someone?
H.S
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Re: Cactus Candy
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 11:49:42 PM AEST
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Hmmmm...cactus candy huh? Uh, can we skip your house on Halloween? j/k ;-}
Nice write. Interesting to say the least. I like it, so don't misundertand. K?
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Cactus Candy
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by Archie on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:05:06 AM AEST
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Interesting write.
("When you want wisdom as much as you want air you shall have it" quote by Aristotle) |
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Re: Cactus Candy
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:45:51 AM AEST
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Hmm Interesting write. Very different. Sweet like freshly picked cactus candy, A bit on the bitter side don't u think.
*hugs*
Sue |
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Re: Cactus Candy
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by tdp on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 08:30:48 PM AEST
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| Bitter Sweet ..i love it! :) |
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