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Taken the Emotions
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:28:42 PM in AEST
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Emotions
Powerful
Things that jump
Cant stop
Cant control
What has happened?
It’s been taken
The heart
All slipping
What is there?
It’s all
That’s why
You lose: yet control
The love
The heart
The soul
Many emotions
Much soul
Too powerful
To soulful
I can’t
Unless……To take me
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brew
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2005-10-11 21:28:42]
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Re: Taken the Emotions
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by crazy on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:32:21 PM AEST
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| very free writen i like how its an abstract poem its very good i liked it alot nw |
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Re: Taken the Emotions
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:03:38 PM AEST
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You lose: yet control
*sigh* Yeah, I like that line, and yes, I can relate. This seems to be confused emotions, regarding someone special.
It seems very in-the-moment, and heartfelt. Nicely done.
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Re: Taken the Emotions
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by wizard on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:01:35 AM AEST
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nice write brew, i like the abstractness of it...its like a fury of emotions.
nice job.
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Re: Taken the Emotions
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:54:06 AM AEST
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| nice very nice |
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Re: Taken the Emotions
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 07:44:34 AM AEST
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Brew this is one I can so much relate to. I like the way you've presented this one. Abstract like in style. Keep penning sweet girl.
*hugs*
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Re: Taken the Emotions
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by Archie on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 09:40:01 PM AEST
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| I know how it is to be emotional. this is a very good portrayal of that. |
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