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untitled 8
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:18:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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hollow and recognize
muffled tears, restrained cries
who am i on the inside
what am i on the inside
divide what i say
from what i do
am i anything
worth anything to you?
a tender touch and revelation
keep the trust on elevation
until, lights out
incomplete and empty
until.....
divide what i say
from what i do
am i anything
worth anything to you
sickness unfolding in the midst
in the night
sickness unfolding
the tongue of the truth i bite
for our sworn love
elevating trust
revelation
i am nothing
i am worth nothing
to you
until....
i undress to pass the test
i'm good, you say
reassure
i'm the best
divide what you say
from what you do
who am i
why do i give me to you?
reassure, reaffirm
then realize
i am nothing
until....
the scrape and tear
the hold of the blade
the flesh and the care
of my own disdain
good-bye to you
good-bye
divide what i say
from what i do
i am everything
i am nothing
i am anything
but you
I AM
I AM NOTHING
NOTHING
I AM NOTHING
until......
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weepingprophet
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2005-10-11 21:18:30]
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Re: untitled 8
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by xPixiexDustx on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:25:57 PM AEST
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| I love the feeling expressed here. It flows great, almost sounds like a song to me. Very good write, I loved it. =) |
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Re: untitled 8
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:07:59 PM AEST
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| Wow! I hope the person you wrote this to gets the point. It sounds like it was written to someone who takes you for granted and uses you for his / her own gain. |
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Re: untitled 8
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:11:35 AM AEST
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