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Hello Again God
Contributed by
allymp
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:33:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I was just sitting
Thinking all alone
Of all of life's mysteries,
All the facts unknown
Then I thought to myself,
"How could this be?"
How can we really know anything
If our only basis is what we see?
What is truely reality,
The dream world or real life?
Is what we call insanity
Nothing more than seeing beyond the human eye?
I can't help but thinks there's more
To this world than what it seems
I can't settle for simple answers,
"It's just life," doesn't fufill my needs
Then suddently i found myself screaming,
"Someone just tell me please!"
I just wanted to understand
But to who was it to that i did scream?
Then it simply all made sense
As I replied,
"Oh, hello again god..."
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allymp
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2005-10-11 19:33:36]
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Re: Hello Again God
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by allymp on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:38:02 PM AEST
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just sdo you all know i have a correction i typed this up fast so here it is
"Then suddently i found myself screaming"
is supposed to be
"then suddenly i found myself yelling" |
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Re: Hello Again God
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 08:30:47 PM AEST
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| I like it with either line. You did a good job writing this. There is more to this poem than what is on the surface. |
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Re: Hello Again God
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:54:06 AM AEST
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A very well written piece of poetry. I feel there is alot more behind the lines though. Keep penning down your emotions. It's great to see u posting again.
*hugs*
Sue |
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