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Silent Cry
Contributed by
blackpoetryqueen
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I’m so tired of being tired, I just lay here confused, dazed
My mind is on its own journey searching for I don’t know what
It’s crazy I can’t even stand to see my own reflection
I never speak what’s on my mind, why should I? No one is listening
My heart is shattered in pieces, every day it’s the same thing I want something different
Every year I get older and more wisdom but yet I’m still stressed
My eyes are tired of crying, my head tired of aching
People use me, but why should they care? My lips just won’t say no, but I never complain I know there’s someone worst off
So I choose to sit here in Silence, hoping one day somebody will hear my Silent Cry
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2005-10-11 17:43:17]
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Re: Silent Cry
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 06:16:22 PM AEST
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This work definitely touched a cord with me. I feel the pain and emotion in this write. It moved me, well done!
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Re: Silent Cry
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by Unbreakable on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 06:23:41 PM AEST
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Very good write...definitely heartfelt and very moving...It flows really well too...keep it up
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Re: Silent Cry
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by Evening_Star on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 06:35:20 PM AEST
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A powerful emotional write I know I have often felt that way. You are not alone.
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Re: Silent Cry
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by Jishes_4_ever on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:10:45 PM AEST
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This is a really good poem... you write really good poetry... :) enjoyed reading this
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Re: Silent Cry
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by crazy on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:30:05 PM AEST
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you wrote what i could not you expressed my feeling to a percise point wow thats amazing how you an take what im feeling and just write it so perfect very wow i dont know how to express how i feel im in awwww!
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