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Ravenous
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 04:57:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I’m wearing my skin today.
It crawls and whimpers for a touch
of magical fingertips, of salacious hands…
Come, lonely stranger,
But don’t come yet…
~Morbid addiction reawakened~
All I want is your body because I don’t need you,
And what I need doesn’t matter because I’ve got you inside me,
And I don’t know who I am anymore,
And I don’t care
And… oh god… this is too perfect,
Too tangible that it’s surreal…
-Don’t stop… please… Don’t stop killing me…-
I smell like a virgin.
Smothered in secretions of lust.
Humid. Smoldering.
My thighs are quaking
And it’s all your fault.
(((Love me like the slut that I am…
Hold me… like the child that I wish to be…)))
Take all that I am, and ravage me,
Never mind these dry tears and reckless pleas,
Tighten the cuffs and grind a little deeper,
Dominate me, sir, because I won’t have it
any other way.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-10-11 16:57:13]
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Re: Ravenous
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:13:30 PM AEST
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Amost emphatic quest in2 the darkside of the
heart, beautiful as always, deep and emotionaly breath taking . . .
(((((((((stephy)))))))))))
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Re: Ravenous
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:18:52 PM AEST
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woawwwwwwww Steph whewwwww this is HOT HOT HOT ooooooo I love this side of you my beautiful little flower. Iv missed you hope that all is well with you
Michelle |
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Re: Ravenous
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by MetalheadSD on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:48:54 PM AEST
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| wow that was powerful. Great job. I enjoyed that. |
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Re: Ravenous
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by guiltycircles on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 09:43:44 PM AEST
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| this is awesome, i love it so much, nice powerful write well done |
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Re: Ravenous
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by brew on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:01:16 PM AEST
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Deep, erotic, and sensual...yet to keep the ones,,,,,,,guessing to what could or will be.! Great write.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Ravenous
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by tweaks2004 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 08:48:15 AM AEST
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I smell like a virgin.
Smothered in secretions of lust.
Humid. Smoldering.
that ***** was bad ass youve definately have a talent for the dark |
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Re: Ravenous
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by sweetangeluk on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 11:48:49 AM AEST
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You little vixen you lol.
This was raw and full of orgasmic pleasure.
Hot and steamy stuff
Goes to cool of in the shower
Superb write
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Ravenous
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by Ravensfire on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 02:45:28 PM AEST
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| Agrees with brew, very erotic, great write! |
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Re: Ravenous
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by emphaticplacebo on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 04:48:55 AM AEST
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Wow Steph, this is indeed a revelation to another side of your poetry I hadnt discovered til now. Sexual, violent and emotional; you have created yet another masterpiece, and despite its unconventional (not a bad thing my any stretch of the imagination) content, I absolutely loved reading it, and no doubt, shall read it again. Thanks for sharing your beautiful mind once again.
Dan |
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Re: Ravenous
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 19th October 2005 @ 12:57:03 AM AEST
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Oooh filthy indeed... I'm in a rather fithy mood
right now as well so I enjoyed it immensely ;)
Yes, I've been away for a while, but I am back
now. I liked this poem written with style, yet
covered in dirt. Keep it up.
Bobo (Joel) |
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