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ghosts in my bed
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:34:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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a cold night a dark room the imprint of your body a long distance form
the thunder strikes the lightning blazes where are you in this storm
feeling ghostly memories of finger nails and hot breath
the gentle kiss or the feel of a soft caress
the ghost of you beside me
this haunting image of waking up with you still beside me my everyday nightmare
or the sound of your feet against my floor eerie in its silence
the gentle sound of deep sleep that put my mind at ease
all faded memories but always to torment me so
faced with a curse of never forgetting day in day out all the same
faced with this vision of your beauty to never forget
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Re: ghosts in my bed
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by remote on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 04:14:41 PM AEST
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Re: ghosts in my bed
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:20:37 PM AEST
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incredibkly written almost soothing yet a buit errie as you speak of her haunting late nights
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Re: ghosts in my bed
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by brew on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:05:15 PM AEST
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Not eerie.just missing........it has been a long time, and now, its time to move on.time to find, a new, and make the ghosts, just disappear.....not completely, leave.! Such emotion, and vivid pictures, with your write.........Astounding...
Brew~ |
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Re: ghosts in my bed
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 05:04:52 AM AEST
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Oh friend,
This is so sad.
It's written well tho.
This breaks my heart.
Hang in there friend and if ya need to talk e mail or pm me and I'll sighn in. In the mean time I shall keep u in my prayers.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy
Holler at me any time u jus need to talk or if ya jus wonna. |
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Re: ghosts in my bed
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 08:08:05 AM AEST
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Regan this is a sad heart breaking write. It's been a while, but you still miss her. May ur heart heal real soon.
*heartfelt hugs 4 u*
Sue |
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Re: ghosts in my bed
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by enigma on
Tuesday, 25th October 2005 @ 11:39:38 PM AEST
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...I felt it...I'm into my second year...sometimes she's a soft gentle memory and sometimes she a spectre...
...I felt it...
thanks,
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