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A Secret Place
Contributed by
ramfire
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 10:35:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Walk with me this cool day
and together through green
grass hills we’ll tend out way
to where stream’s fast and clean.
Where orange poppies are seen
and the lace of soft queens grow
where this my head can lean
down upon your lap low.
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ramfire
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2005-10-11 10:35:06]
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Re: A Secret Place
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by bethie on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 11:16:24 AM AEST
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| This is very lovely. |
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Re: A Secret Place
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by remote on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:43:37 PM AEST
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| Lovely! |
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Re: A Secret Place
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by jheng on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 04:09:18 PM AEST
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great piece, i can imagine myself walking hand in hand with my bf in a beautiful place you've described |
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Re: A Secret Place
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by kiss4roq on
Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 11:17:21 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written poem. Pulls emotion. Great Write. |
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