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Perfect World
Contributed by
MetalheadSD
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Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 01:51:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In a perfect world
She would be with me
Hand in hand
Happy we would be
I would look into her eyes
Felling joyful and serene
If I had met her earlier
This is how things would have been
Spoiling her to the core
Treating her the way she should
I would try my hardest to make her happy
Hoping that I could
But the world is not perfect
It is sometimes evil and cruel
But when there is happiness
Light makes darkness a fool
Because I know her
Because she is in my life
My darkness has subsided
I no longer feel strife
But friends we are
And friends we will be
Unless fate twists paths
That I would like to see
And because this world is not perfect
I still venture out on my own
Looking for the one like you
The one that does not exist and is unknown
Copyright ©
MetalheadSD
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2005-10-11 01:51:06]
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Re: Perfect World
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 03:03:19 AM AEST
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| welcome to YPDC! Great write, very heartfelt,just remember paths can twist the other way also, looking forward to reading more of your work |
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Re: Perfect World
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by LEMMEN on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 05:02:07 AM AEST
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Good Write
~DENNIS~ |
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