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Angel of the Morning
Contributed by
StormyEyed84
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Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:42:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Her dress is white, gleaming, viriginal splendor
She is alone, broken, bewildered
Her hair of fire and crimson cheek
Her orbs leak tears of empty spaces.
The wind is cold, inviting, soothing sting
She is alone, silent, seeking
Her skin like gossamer of the palest moonlight
Her delicate feet touch the comforting grass
The ocean is smiling, loving, beckoning home
She is alone, wanting, waiting
Her lips like parted pilgrims
Her arms spread welcoming the nights embrace
Her essence is screaming, releasing, begging freedom
She is alone, falling, flying
Her body like arched arrow
Her heart fills with abandoned hope
Her dress is white, gleaming, virginal splendor
She is alone, patient, pacing
Her spirit like unsettled winter
Her soul waits eternally for yours
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Re: Angel of the Morning
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 08:04:45 PM AEST
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God write.
The song angel of the morning is one of my favorite writes.
Keep up the good writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Angel of the Morning
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by emystar on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 08:05:32 PM AEST
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| Sorry that was suppose to be good write. |
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Re: Angel of the Morning
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 08:14:44 PM AEST
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| This is very good. It actually reminds me of a series of poems I wrote called "The winter of my youth". Your poem is full of sadness and longing and like my soul yours seems to cry out too. I say that so that you do not feel that you are alone. |
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Re: Angel of the Morning
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by ChibiMiroku on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:15:23 PM AEST
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Mwahahah. I've seen the reference to lips as pilgrims before, but never was able to use it myself.
Nicely done, and I like the contrast between the first and last stanzas. Well done! |
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Re: Angel of the Morning
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 12:20:47 AM AEST
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It's hard to add to the previous comments as it's basically already been said. Great job! Keep it up and thank you for sharing.
Take care,
Tim
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Re: Angel of the Morning
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by Loende on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 07:28:37 AM AEST
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I absolutely loved the last two lines. This was a teriffic write. Great job.
Be well,
Loende |
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