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death cravings
Contributed by
crazy
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Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:05:17 PM in AEST
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im gonna get rid of my life
i dont want to live anymore
will cut my throat withthis knife
lay there daed on the floor
going to have fun when i slice
take the knife all the way around
this cutting will feel real nice
then lay there six feet in the ground
i want to rot in this grave
will be devored by maggots
gonna enjoy becoming a death slave
get away from all you faggots
hope they have fun on the inside
when i die no one will miss me
i feel that i have died right
ill be gone for the rest of eternity
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Re: death cravings
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by Lollypopxcore on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:17:17 PM AEST
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I loved this poem...
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Re: death cravings
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by crazy on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:20:30 PM AEST
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| jc i love you you write the best poems for me |
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Re: death cravings
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 07:20:13 PM AEST
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| wow...that's just a really ignorant and badly written poem. Your boyfriend needs to grow up. |
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Re: death cravings
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by justkevi on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 01:48:46 AM AEST
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| If you actually care about him, you'll make him seek treatment immediately. |
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Re: death cravings
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 07:42:46 AM AEST
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I have to be honest, I did not enjoy this one bit. It started out cool, but as it went on it just became vulgar and offensive. I know your boyfriend wrote this, so this is not a dirrect attack on you.
See you around.
~souLBro~ |
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Re: death cravings
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:59:23 PM AEST
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| Yeah...I usually try not to leave negative comments....but, man this is ate up. You folks need to talk to a professional. You are obviously quite young. You do not realize how much life there is ahead of you both. You glamourize death. How sad. I wish you peace and good professional help. Laura |
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