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Say the Word
Contributed by
UnfallenTears
on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 01:07:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Say the word
Bring these stolen dreams crashing down
Crack the utopian sky and watch it fall
In black tear's waters, watching yesterday drown
Hear your rehearsed sentiments reach innocent ears
Silence bleeds as the forsaken cry
Tomorrow's strangers fade into an empty promise
Quiet sounds as the innocence dies
Hear the foundation crumble
Emotion breaks through this hollow hello
Say the words, blasphemous credulity
The dreamer's rescue lost in purity's shadow
Silent, these souls who cried into the blackness
Internal screams never heard
Innocent eyes bleed tears, pleading you not to
Say the word
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UnfallenTears
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2005-10-10 13:07:01]
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Re: Say the Word
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 01:17:42 PM AEST
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Well constructed! I love the way you use the beginning phrase at the end, but with the opposite desire. Well done.
Take care.
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Re: Say the Word
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 11:29:32 AM AEST
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Well written.. I liked it. the flow was smooth and it was a really great write...
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Re: Say the Word
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by mysticaldancer on
Wednesday, 1st March 2006 @ 02:02:30 PM AEST
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| once again, a really good poem, but is it about who i think it is? (PP)? |
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