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Fates Curse
Contributed by
suprasurfer
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Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:57:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You left your picture on the dresser
the perfect colors were that of my mother
you truly remind me of complete beauty
the kind that will leave and not return
"Where did you go" is the thought I harbor
the nights are cold and Im alone
I think of us in warmer weather
when you were just a woman and I just a man
perhaps fate was jealous we defied her wishes
tearing us apart to distant shores
Watch the stars and I'll come to you
the warmth of the sun is my radient love
How do we find the life we dreamed
can we shape our destinies and become one
No matter the answer I will try and do
whatever must be done for us. Will you?
Copyright ©
suprasurfer
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2005-10-10 12:57:34]
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Re: Fates Curse
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 08:11:07 PM AEST
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Do what I do, go outside at night, and stare up at the moon, for some reason I find my answers there, and that is where I pray for all the world, and I feel the answers are present.. if your prayer has come to life, then I have received a blessing from the Lord...and so have you...
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Re: Fates Curse
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 22nd December 2006 @ 04:11:04 PM AEST
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this is a sad piece.. its very powerful though.. it can be taken two ways at least i think so.. I really like the ending beautifully ended
vampyress Jenni |
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