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Quantum Suicide
Contributed by
remote
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Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:03:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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She watched me sleep
watched my last breath
watched me wake up
this morning again
What just happened?
pray tell,
I asked from her
I wanted to know
Well, you see
the universe,
at your thought of dying,
split itself in two
She said and carried on
In one, you died
in another you survived
thats just what happened to you
The one world
where you are dead
you will never taste
the pleasure of success
of your fruitless act
In the universe
where you survive
There's just no escape from life
(Inspired by a thought experiment in Quantum Physics. See http://www.higgo.com/quantum/qti.htm)
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remote
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2005-10-10 11:03:05]
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Re: Quantum Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:15:17 AM AEST
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Multiverses? An interesting thought, but I'd refrain from using it against someone who really is suicidal . . .
Keep writing,
N_F |
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Re: Quantum Suicide
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:30:42 AM AEST
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| Intresting in theory, but laughable in reality. |
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Re: Quantum Suicide
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by Archie on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 01:25:21 PM AEST
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I agree with N_F I do think this is a good write.
I actually see duality in this poem of a more spiritual sense that i will not explain for that is not what i think you intended to say. |
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Re: Quantum Suicide
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by WAE on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 02:23:45 PM AEST
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Hey J., you know I am glad that you are thinking about things like that... Although even scientists aren't sure about anything, we have to believe in something... In my case I don't care that much about the issue of parallel worlds or whatever, for I have no perception of them... So why to bother...
Good luck,
Alex |
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Re: Quantum Suicide
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 10:14:11 PM AEST
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this was enjoyable 2 read certainly unique in
it's own way, very nice writting i like alot of your poems u have a nice style it's consistant.
Ben |
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