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Painful Memories
Contributed by
loopylou
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Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 10:11:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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throw away these memories to the wind
throw them away
like they don't mean a thing
if i was the reason
and if i am worth your thought
then look at this face
and don't let these words be ignored
It hurts to think of all the good times now
and how we use to be
it's strange I know
but i lock away the thoughts of when i was happy
you look at me with eyes wide
and arms open
but the sparks gone
and the bonds broken
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loopylou
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2005-10-10 10:11:00]
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Re: Painful Memories
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 10:41:05 AM AEST
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| Hmm...you could have made it a little deeper and a bit less generic, the whole "agony of breaking up poem" is so overused that it's hard to be original. |
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Re: Painful Memories
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by girish on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 10:56:24 AM AEST
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read my poem "The desire for reunion"if yous is lost love, it will get uited if you post my poem as yours to your loved one. read my other love poems and comment on them as well.
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Re: Painful Memories
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:50:09 PM AEST
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| well I liked it ,breaking up is always hard,,,,Eddy |
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