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I Sit Here
Contributed by
Sezzie69
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Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 05:52:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I sit here in the darkness of black,
Soft as velvet it feels on my skin,
It fills my lungs with deep dark shame,
And fills my heart with hate.
I sit here in the brightness of white,
Sharp as knives it feels on my skin,
It fills my lungs with searing pain,
And fills my heart with fate.
I sit here in the dream of mind,
Nothing I feel on my skin,
It fills my lungs with strong, pungent blame,
And fills my heart with wait.
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Sezzie69
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2005-10-10 05:52:52]
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Re: I Sit Here
(User Rating: 1 )
by Zandria on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:02:13 AM AEST
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'thought provoking' doesn't quite cover how this one made me feel....I sat here staring, re-reading over and over .......
WoW.
Dark
I very much liked it.
K.U.T.G.W.
keep up the good work :) |
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Re: I Sit Here
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by Sezzie69 on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 06:08:25 AM AEST
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| THank you very much! lotsa people don't like my poetry and say it is really...bad basically, has no structure and is boring to read, so this means alot. thankyou ! Sezzie x |
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Re: I Sit Here
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by ChibiMiroku on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 09:25:19 AM AEST
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Hah. Fun poem!
I like it! |
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