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911
Contributed by
crysolow328
on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:38:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Take 9 more pills
To ease the pain.
Make 1 more cut
To keep me sane.
Just 1 more hit.
Will make me okay.
A few more drinks and
It shall go away.
Cover up
My tears with smiles.
Take a journey
In depression miles.
The happiness
Is what I miss; and
I ask you,
Could you live like this?
Copyright ©
crysolow328
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2005-10-09 23:38:41]
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Re: 911
(User Rating: 1 )
by redtempest13 on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:47:17 AM AEST
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| Deep....I've been there. It's tough but life goes on. It always gets better before it gets worse. Hang in there...it WILL get better. |
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Re: 911
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by ThePhilosopher on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 04:44:53 PM AEST
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| A very good poem true depression, willing to do anything to get out. Deep and dark. I like it |
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Re: 911
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by JockPhillips on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 09:33:22 PM AEST
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| It's good with noticing that and such, and it will be when the good returns because then the happiness will too. Don't get down now and keep up the bringing back of the good through poem songs and other things. |
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Re: 911
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 11:58:59 AM AEST
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dark...but beautiful. absolutely wonderful....i can feel the pain
- Bethani - |
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