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Whoever Who Are
Contributed by
Writting_Fever
on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 09:53:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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That's the guy standing,
That I let down,
Now I feel embarrassed,
Without someone else around,
He's watching me closely,
As I flirt with you,
I think that he's nervous,
For me to be with you,
I see that girl with him,
And I see he's moved on,
I can't stop my staring,
This feeling's too strong,
The whole night I watch him,
And he looks at me,
But he wouldn't focus on her,
Unless he thinks it would be,
So stay with me now,
Maybe walk to my car,
I want to be with you here,
Whoever you are.
Copyright ©
Writting_Fever
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2005-10-09 21:53:12]
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Re: Whoever Who Are
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by BEBE on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 09:58:13 PM AEST
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Very nice
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Re: Whoever Who Are
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 10:32:04 PM AEST
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A well written and between the lines suspencfull agitation of a poem, it gives off, a mood of touchiness, unsettling but that's what it's ment 2 do, your a good writter easy 2 read style.
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Re: Whoever Who Are
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by BurriedByMyLies on
Sunday, 23rd October 2005 @ 10:31:21 PM AEST
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| Another very beautiful poem. This one really got to me, and I could easily understand the kind of situation, although i've never actually been in one of those. A sign of a grat poem, and a dreat writer ! |
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