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A Dark Blue
Contributed by
Aeturos
on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:04:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Underneath oceans,
Inside of the sea,
Lies a land far from here
Plunge into the darkness,
Breath in the sea!
Feel the water caress you
Inside of your heart,
Within your mind,
Explore the undersea world
Amazement is felt
Found at so immortal
A melody's being within
The sailors warn you
This is the tempest
That themselves even find
So tempting
But heed them not!
Take my hand!
Follow me to the land
Beneath the sea within
It might be dark
It will be cold
This unexplored
Part of the world
But listen not!
Take no warning!
They no not of what they speak!
This sea so hidden
Will bring about
That which makes us weak
But we will face these fears,
And conquer the darkness
Which causes you to weep
So take my hand
We'll go to this land
Hidden beneath the sea within
Copyright ©
Aeturos
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2005-10-09 16:04:20]
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Re: A Dark Blue
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:44:06 PM AEST
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| Wow, that's beautiful! I loved the scenic image it provides. Great write. |
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Re: A Dark Blue
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 05:05:03 PM AEST
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| Beautiful poem, I like the way you take the reader on this nice journey into the sea and the soul, deep dark blue, brilliant comparisons between the two RL |
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