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Future fighting
Contributed by
dezy122
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Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:23:46 PM in AEST
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He walks through the aisle,
What will come next?
His gloves on his hands,
No blood on his vest.
He steps in the ring,
The pressure is on,
He knows no different
His mind has gone.
Round one has come,
The bell will ring,
The pressure is mounting,
As the crowd sing.
He hits his opponent,
With a left then a right
What will happen next?
Has he won the fight?
The round is over,
He is panting for breath,
His body is shaking,
Could this be his death?
The fight has finished,
He was smashed like a drum,
The crowd applauded,
He has won.
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dezy122
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2005-10-09 15:23:46]
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Re: Future fighting
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:26:00 PM AEST
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A warm welcome to YPDC.
An interesting write you have here. You draw the reader in with your write. The poem flowed well. I hope to read some more poetry from you.
*hugs*
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Re: Future fighting
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by ChibiMiroku on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 11:01:52 PM AEST
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| Simple language, but I liked the message. Good poem! |
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Re: Future fighting
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by ArsenicMyst on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:20:50 PM AEST
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not only victory for a good fight
but one as well for a good write!
good job
Arsenic`·.¸·:· |
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