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Heaven's Tears
Contributed by
In_a_While
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Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:21:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I shaved off my skin today, to see where i belong
am i like you? loving, lost and superfiscial?
I crushed my eyes of colour, to hear what you have to say
are you like me? deaf to truth in words so vain?
Heaven loves you, like it loves me too
so won't you tell me truth...
Tears are of the broke heart's blood
so won't you sell me love...
I cut my tongue in half today, to share these words of red
am i like you? bleeding from the heart instead?
I spilled my insides into bowls, to spare the soup it's salt
are you like me? burning from the taste of fault?
Hell it waits for me, as it does you too
so we can be the drying glue...
Hugs are snakes that take your breath
so we can be a swallowed death...
I burned myself to be well done, to share the taste of hate
am i like you? never happy with what's on your plate?
I covered myself in leaves of fall, to change with colours gone
are you like me? buried in the shades of dawn?
dw
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Re: Heaven's Tears
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:35:16 PM AEST
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wow this is a very interesting write.. i really enjoyed it it actually makes you think and question things.. i especially like the first line and last line.. awesome job..
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Re: Heaven's Tears
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by O7NeVeS on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 07:11:40 PM AEST
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| i would agree, this is a very interesting write...I like the questions u ask! Good Job. TD |
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Re: Heaven's Tears
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by Justintears on
Monday, 10th October 2005 @ 12:29:42 PM AEST
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What a sorrowful ride... Well done. The questions you wrote are the questions i ask myself sometimes as well. Nothing but pure excellence,... reminds me a little bit of type o negative lyrics (cool)
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