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A Life in Need of a Saviour
Contributed by
namelessfaceless
on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:17:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
self-harmpoetry
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Everyday it won't go away
This feeling torments me from day to day
It's a feeling that I cannot describe
It feels like there's nothing inside
My friends can't see from day to day
the pain that is inside of me
So now I plan to keep inside
This pain I try so hard to hide.
I try to do away with this
They catch me in the midst of it
I place the blade back on the shelf
As they try to save me from myself
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namelessfaceless
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2005-10-09 15:17:15]
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Re: A Life in Need of a Saviour
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by Mild_Tempest on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 05:34:25 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I sometimes feel like this. Way to describe it. Good job. |
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Re: A Life in Need of a Saviour
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by coolbreeze17 on
Thursday, 13th October 2005 @ 11:08:26 PM AEST
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| good write |
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Re: A Life in Need of a Saviour
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by SylviaWalters on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 12:49:57 AM AEST
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| great! you described the feelings so well. a really, really good poem, well done! |
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