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Assuming and choices

Contributed by naijerana on Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 12:05:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Why me
All the time it is me
What will you do now
What can you do next
Do you understand
Must I help
And the look on her face
The expression on her face
Like an open book
Ready to be read
Reading
O that little one
She may be old
Little she is
I must help her all the way
Until she is turning around
In her grave
On this moment I ’am already decomposing
Though nobody can smell the rotting flesh
Not even her
But always me
Or so it seems
Then I must say
It seems a lot then
And why
Why must she know about my appointments anyway
Those are my affairs not hers
Why is she meddling
Because she must
She must do nothing
It is an choice
Though with the wrong choice
People begin to irritate
Though even with the good one
People begin to irritate
So there is neither an good nor an wrong choice
Well maybe there is
Because with one there are lesser problems
Than the other
But do we make an choice
Or is everything already made
Do we just assume we can make choices
The same as we assume one will go to the heavens
With wings on his back
Singing psalm songs and kumbaya my lord
With Jesus and God in the middle
When we have lived an good life
Or that spiked chains will drag us through the earth
Showing all the sins we have done in our life’s
Until you stop on solid ground
Seeing fellow sinners as slaves to the Devil
All is assumed
Nothing is really knowing
The same as saying heaven is white
Maybe it is yellow, purple or even red and black
And maybe hell is green, brown or even white and bleu
So to can I assume that she is seeing me
Like an little child
Though in fact
She wants to help me
On her own way
Though I dislike it
Maybe it is her way
Or it was already decided for her
I can only assume that
Nothing more
Nothing less
Only assuming
And so still I ‘am turning around in my own grave
Now only with my bones
And an stench you do not wish to smell
Is everything we know and what we do based on

Assuming and choices

Copyright Â© naijerana ... [ 2005-10-09 12:05:20]
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Re: Assuming and choices (User Rating: 1 )
by JockPhillips on Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 11:52:09 AM AEST
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Good with imagery words and other things. Keep reaching for the good.

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