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the apology
Contributed by
judasman
on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:18:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
ApologyPoetry
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apology
you were the one
the only one
i really loved you
i never ever told you
never even showed you
but i really loved you
i really needed you
i can see
that now
but back then
long ago
i was blind to your love
confession
back then long ago
i did things
which i shouldn't have
back then long ago
i used things
which i shouldn't have even touched
years of selfish abuse
and
i never ever told you
or showed you
that i needed you
that i really loved you
and i should have
Copyright ©
judasman
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2005-10-09 11:18:25] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the apology
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:37:54 PM AEST (User
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this is a very powerful and sad write.. sometimes we need to express ourselves.. i know this is old but its a beautiful apology type of write.. very well composed
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Re: the apology
(User Rating: 1 ) by coolbreeze17 on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 11:52:10 PM AEST (User
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well written ..you know its never to late to tell someone how you feel... |
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Re: the apology
(User Rating: 1 ) by ArsenicMyst on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:47:20 PM AEST (User
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this seems an honest write
but would have it sufficed?
probably not ...
we learn from our mistakes ...
hopefully so ...
good poem
¸·:·´Arsenic
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