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Care you not.
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Do you see the tears
Or where they’ve left their trace
And can you tell, you broke my heart
By the look upon my face
And can you see the sadness
Your words have brought to bear
And do you know the pain you’ve caused
Or do you really care
Can you know the feelings
Within my wounded soul
Can you see as words once said
Brings about their toll
And do you see the tears
Or where they’ve left their trace
And can you see just what your words
Have brought about to place
And do you know the horror
That there is inside
To face again the morrow
In a world where I must hide
And do you think about it
Or if that you would dare
To think upon your actions
And wonder if they’re fair
To toss aside another heart
And leave it lay to bleed
To make again another start
To fill your wonton need
So can you see tears
Or where they left their trace
As you walk upon this broken man
You’ve left up in my place
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2003-01-19 18:00:00]
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Re: Care you not.
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by Ilhar on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 06:02:47 PM AEST
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I have been there ...very strong sentiment ...good write
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Re: Care you not.
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 06:17:07 PM AEST
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| Fantastic wordsy! Such deep pain resounds in this write. Well done! Larry |
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Re: Care you not.
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by DreamWeaver on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 05:44:18 AM AEST
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| Great poem ... love this ... can relate so well. |
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Re: Care you not.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 21st January 2003 @ 07:20:49 PM AEST
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Oh...I loved this.... lovely write, wordsy..
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