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Crossroads Of The Twilight
Contributed by
secretwind
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Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:26:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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sometimes I get so mixed up inside
though I am so dissapointed
I'm loving the feeling and the taste
of life.
you can see my scars
and you can hold me and chip away at my heart of stone
but my confusion
feeds on in silent misery
as the psychosphere spins on and on and on.
What I am trying to say
Is I love the way
tears of joy
F
A
L
L
from my eyes
though I want to die....
don't know what is real
I forgotten how to feel
and it doesn't matter what I wanted to say.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2005-10-09 03:26:42]
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Re: Crossroads Of The Twilight
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:49:09 AM AEST
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doesn't mater what cha wonna say Tony, I hear every word u say.
this write is as magic as your pen name.
I luv this one. More please?
hugs, luv, big smiles,
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Re: Crossroads Of The Twilight
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by shelby on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 04:39:45 PM AEST
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brilliat emotional write
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Re: Crossroads Of The Twilight
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by hauntedscorp on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 05:39:20 PM AEST
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Geez...this one is so sad, and sounds so hopeless. I hope you realize, things are never as bad as they seem, and even the worst situation can ultimately lead to a turn for the better...Subject aside, this poem is as good as your others. It's deeply heartfelt and shamelessly honest. I like the style you wrote it in as well. Take Care.
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