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possession
Contributed by
grim6669
on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 02:42:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i will drain,
your soul from you,
i won't stop,
until i'm through,
but when i am,
you'll know because,
you'll be dead,
just like i was,
deap in your soul,
i lay inside,
waiting for the moment,
that i should come alive,
everything you do,
is controlled by me,
make one wrong move,
and then you'll see,
everyone knows,
that you have changed,
but no one knows,
what change was made,
your touch so cold,
because you're dead,
it's just my voice,
inside your head,
guiding you,
along your way,
so forever,
i will stay,
you're the victim,
of this possession,
yes i know,
it's my obsession.
Copyright ©
grim6669
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2005-10-09 02:42:55]
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Re: possession
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:28:31 AM AEST
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| I like the demonic flow of this..... |
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Re: possession
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 05:05:18 PM AEST
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| Yo, mad props, that poem is freakin nice....check out my other one, I think you'll li it...keep up the good work, good stuff....We few dark writers gotta support each other... |
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Re: possession
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by ChibiMiroku on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 10:33:34 PM AEST
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| Really dark. I like it! :D |
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Re: possession
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by onedysturbdchick on
Tuesday, 8th November 2005 @ 12:30:02 AM AEST
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| good stuff....really got into this one |
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