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Shadows
Contributed by
lil_pup91
on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 12:17:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Can't speak
Can't breath
They jump at the movement
Can't see
Can't think
They hear your thoughts
They are out there
Where ever there's darkness
They lurk and crawl
Darkness is surrounding all
Need to scream
Need to breath
And they know
Waiting
Searching
Screaming
Darkness
Death
Shadows
The End
Is here
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2005-10-09 00:17:10]
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Re: Shadows
(User Rating: 1 )
by Dark_and_Cold on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 12:27:07 AM AEST
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| Uninspired...Generic... |
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Re: Shadows
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:49:09 AM AEST
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| Hm, I pictured shadows and a running warewolf when I read this one, I liked it. Good key points as well. |
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