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The Wolves Endure
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 11:05:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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..............................................................................................The world is
A paper coughing paper, ocean skies and fireflies.
A white light snowing in the stars.
........................................................................fondled broken by the stars;
The empty wolves bay.
Autumn begins.
..............................................................................................the wolves endure
A suffering.
A brief delight,
........................................................................a long winters press,
Upon my fingers hesitate,
And reach from door to open door
..............................................................................................to continue, to embrace.
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iodinelove
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2005-10-08 23:05:04]
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Re: The Wolves Endure
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by Dark_and_Cold on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 11:31:08 PM AEST
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| Hmm...well...that's...certrainly.....short... |
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Re: The Wolves Endure
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by emystar on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 02:53:21 AM AEST
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Well now it's short tree but the best dang hug I've had in many moons.
Keep playing.
big smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Wolves Endure
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 03:33:15 AM AEST
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| Interesting |
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Re: The Wolves Endure
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by MrJeans on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 10:29:37 PM AEST
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Different but cool
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Re: The Wolves Endure
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 02:32:39 AM AEST
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The styling is rather odd, but the lines are very poetic.
Nicely done.
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Re: The Wolves Endure
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 05:56:26 AM AEST
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Abstract is the word. Good choise for a category. If I said I understood all I read, I would be lying. If I said I didn't love it, though, I would also lie.
This is awesome. Very good poetry.
Take care.
David |
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