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October's Tears
Contributed by
karamiel
on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:25:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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She wanted another chance to prove she was sorry
His long hours at work made her sad and lonely
He found her kissing another man in bed
Their love and romance stained
Lost confidence
She runs to him, crying and begging for forgiveness
He pushes her away
With hurt
Yelling malediction
With tears in her eyes she promises a tomorrow
He takes out his ring
His voice hoarse, trying to swallow
The memories they shared as a couple in love
One day in October when they exchanged their vows with trust
Her invitation denied as he walks out the house
He looks up at the skies
October’s tears swelling his eyes
(c)10/05karamiel
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karamiel
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2005-10-08 22:25:05] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: October's Tears
(User Rating: 1 ) by BEBE on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:27:36 PM AEST (User
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Very good job... wow i feel really bad for the guy..
GODBLESS
BEBE |
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