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Breathe
Contributed by
panther_1978
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Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Your hurting inside and I know it
but I can’t seem to stop it,
the love I have for you, wont let me!
I just want to see you happy,
I know you say that you are but you aren’t.
I can tell it and you tell me…
You say that you are happy with other people around
but when you’re alone or with me, you seem so deserted!
I’m trying to get you to see that you’re not on your own
because you’re with people that care for you
that will stand beside you and not give up
I do such things as talk to you every night,
be with you; tell you that I love you,
tell you that my hearts in yours beating!
And I mean it, every word…
You know that I care for you!
In one breath you say “I wonder
how it would be when we meet”
but in the other you say like the opposite…
that “why don’t you let your heart fly”
but I don’t want to…
It’s yours for the taking!
I would do anything for you…
But you have walls, so high that I cant get over them,
Although I’m trying to get over that wall but it keeps getting higher and higher!
Our hearts need a chance to meet,
a chance to see each other…
My love is like a waterfall, it never ends…
it just keeps getting higher, higher and higher!
I wish you could see that…
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2003-01-19 17:20:00]
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Re: Breathe
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 05:36:07 PM AEST
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Awww... Mike...even though I've never spoken to you before I can see from this beautiful poem that you have a wonderful heart.... :) She's very lucky to have a friend like you
~Dani~ |
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Re: Breathe
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 05:38:26 PM AEST
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| WHAT A BEAUTIFUL WRITE,ON FRIENDSHIP tHEY ARE LUCKT TO HAVE A FRIEND IN YOU! gREAT PEICE! cHRISTINA |
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Re: Breathe
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by OreO on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 11:12:38 AM AEST
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Awww Mike you are my very best friend in the whole world...i cherish you so deeply and your heart is a heart of gold...you truly know how to make me cry dont you? hehe...Don't be so hard on yourself you know i will always be your friend and somtimes walls arent meant to climb, but if and when they ever are then it wont be hard..trust in your heart as you tell me all the time...and beleive in yourself ...who knows two great beautiful friends may have to meet one day ..if only to give eachother a hug....but either way know that you are my Magic Miracle...you know this....beautiful write Mike...your heart is very beautiful my friend....love this...
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Re: Breathe
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by Slipknot555666 on
Friday, 24th January 2003 @ 05:20:45 AM AEST
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| Hola, that was really good. I liked it. Good job =). |
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