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Bad Day
Contributed by
wesmaun
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Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 07:34:16 PM in AEST
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As I sit here tears stream down my face.
I wonder why I’m in this race.
The trials, the problems, and the mistakes I make.
It all seems kind of pointless kind of fake.
I fear that only more sorrows come ahead.
And they will keep coming till the day I am dead.
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wesmaun
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2005-10-08 19:34:16]
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Re: Bad Day
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by brew on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 07:46:59 PM AEST
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Sorry, the day went bad.....we all have that from time, to time.! Things have to get bad, before they go back to good.! Try smiling.....it does make ppl wondering, what you are thinking.....................
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Re: Bad Day
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by inoc on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:49:41 PM AEST
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maybe think like this....
having a bad day -helps- us appreciate the good days....
I liked your feelings as I can relate...on my -bad days...
coni |
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Re: Bad Day
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:06:08 PM AEST
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i hope that that day didn't last very long!! cause, you don't make just mistakes... this poem was NOT a mistake, that was truely awesome!! i loved it, and all of my days are like that. i hope you have healed from that day!
but, i truely enjoyed that and hope you keep writing!!
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Re: Bad Day
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by zalzool on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:42:17 PM AEST
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man dont worry bout it ...
i guess it was just a bad day as from the other comments everyone has bad days
iv been havin a bad 6 months but look on the bright side they can only go good ...
and besides everyone makes mistakes
think of all the good things uv done |
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Re: Bad Day
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by gwenevere on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 06:36:29 AM AEST
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It has been a bad day,now put it all behind
Look towards the future and the fun that you can find
Don't be so down hearted, we're all here just to share
Oh, I want you just to now how much I really care |
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