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These Tears Hold More Than Water

Contributed by abnormalpunk on Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 04:21:02 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

if following is wrong
how am i not supposed to get lost?

take me away
take me now
to your safehaven that you have built

beneath this bombshelter lies
a nuclear factory

how should i breath
when all i inhale
is the exhales of humanity

am i not my own?
for you try to change me
and somehow...

it works

now i know that i cannot be free from my past
because it will always return

and haunt me

like

a

ghost

the end of my life
will be the end of yours
and his
and hers
and theirs

because i am not an individual any longer
i am now one of you

or have always been...

Copyright © abnormalpunk ... [ 2005-10-08 16:21:02]
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Re: These Tears Hold More Than Water (User Rating: 1 )
by russ-dawg on Tuesday, 11th October 2005 @ 07:19:48 PM AEST
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"how should i breath
when all i inhale
is the exhales of humanity" that is deep and true "the end of my life
will be the end of yours
and his
and hers
and theirs" those are both great deep and true thoughts and this poem was very wicked it has kind of a sad feel to it but it is still very beautiful! keep up the awsome work!!!

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