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A navy pagans wish
Contributed by
sonic_phoenix
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Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 01:36:46 PM in AEST
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stand on the edge, of the end of my past
growing old leaving my childhood behind fast
mom i love you and i wanted to you to know
with you is home no matter how far away i go
the summer went so fast and then i was gone
my most sincere apologisey to any who feel wronged
i'm all grown up and looking for my own new life
wishing to be a child once more so as to leave the strife
gods answer my one plea, as all alone i stand
let me find one to love, some to hold my hand
navy blue and a pentagram are my color and shield
yet i need a love that will never yield
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Re: A navy pagans wish
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:11:04 PM AEST
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hmm. this poem just seems a little insecure, just in the way you express yourself. it seems that you are looking for something you fear you will never have, and the whole pagan thing seems like a cover up for maybe something you are missing....
why pagan? do you feel that for some reason it can help you be able to give and recieve the love you so desperatey wish??? |
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Re: A navy pagans wish
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:50:06 PM AEST
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Beautiful write..
You prayed, open up just a little wider to receive your prayer.. amen..
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: A navy pagans wish
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by ziggy on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:59:45 PM AEST
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| Good stuff....has that leaving home feel to it. |
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