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Standing Here
Contributed by
Crimsonflame
on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 07:01:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You laugh with me,share my moments,
You gave me your company,
When Im with you,nothing matters,
But I am invisible to you,
I am a breeze,I call,I beckon to you,
I whisper my love,my feelings,
You hear me but you dont see me,
I hover over the sands,I skim over the seas,
My breezy whispers do not even touch you,
Im standing here,why cant you see me?
Why wont you find me?
Look at me,I'm here beside you,
I want to heal your pain,your sorrow,
Just look at me,Im here,
If you cant see me,
Then there is no point I am here to hold you in my weightless arms,
Just think of me when the air is still,
If you cant see me,don't find me,
But remember,I will always love you,
Copyright ©
Crimsonflame
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2005-10-08 07:01:10] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Standing Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 10:49:16 AM AEST (User
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Awwe* i loved your poem its awesome...keep writing...if you get a chance please read my poem called "i love you if only you knew how much" thanks once again awesome right very emotional and sad..thats how i feel for my now ex boyfriend...(tears) keep writing
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Re: Standing Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by jheng on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 12:07:52 PM AEST (User
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such a good poem, i can truly understand how you feel, loving someone is hard when one is not always appreciated |
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Re: Standing Here
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 9th November 2005 @ 07:16:45 AM AEST (User
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Beautiful. Again, I love your choice of words. You build an awsome poem.
Take care.
David |
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