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Quicksand
Contributed by
xguitar4lifex
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Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 10:13:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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you're living.
and you think everything is going fine.
but then one thing goes wrong,
then another,
then another,
and you try to fight back,
but the harder you fight,
the deeper you sink,
until you cant move,
you cant breath,
beacause you're in over your head.
like quicksand.
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2005-10-07 22:13:53]
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Re: Quicksand
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by crazy on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 09:20:41 AM AEST
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| its so simple yet it just has the right lil thing to make you go wow |
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Re: Quicksand
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by inoc on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 09:24:36 AM AEST
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...like hitting a nail straight on the head.....this poem is direct and correct.....are you a believer....if so reach for Christ and He will help you out....[sorry for the lecture but hope*smile* you don't mind?]
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