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Just One of those Days
Contributed by
Redhotchilichic
on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:56:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Wake up in the morning
To break my constant snoring
Time to get up for work
How boring
Make some coffee to wake me up
But I slip over and break my cup
I don’t know what’s up
I guess it’s just one of those days
You know how nothing goes your way
And it seems to stay like that
For the rest of the day
And that’s a fact
When you can’t keep track of time
And everything seems out of line
You can’t find
What you’re looking for
You know the day’s going to be bad
As soon as you put your foot out the door
It makes you mad
And a little bit sad
But when the day is done
And the sun starts to set
You can snuggle up in bed
And start to forget
The worries in you head
And instead
Fall into a peaceful slumber
While you get lost in your dreams
You can forget how bad you day has been
And your troubles seem to melt away
Well, that is until the next day!
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Re: Just One of those Days
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 09:00:29 PM AEST
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Well -0 that is a very pessimistic and glum view of life and time given us as a precious gift.
Time must be filled! -, give a bright smile to some homeless or other sad person, or a child that lost his parents. Just smile
And you have done a great thing.
Your distress is poignantly written. - Poignant emptiness
Fill it! - time is precious. We have to give an a count of it.
Sad and beautifuly penned
Elizabeth
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Re: Just One of those Days
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by hoist1atca on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 01:25:53 AM AEST
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Sometimes things are supposed to go wrong-
This makes one appreciat the things in life that go right-
keep on going just like the bunny...
Joe |
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