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please.....
Contributed by
ashleigh4
on
Sunday, 19th January 2003 @ 02:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Please, find the vein
and push against the pain.
Please, find the courage
to push down again.
Please, God, let me go,
i'm sick of this drama show.
Please, let me sleep,
a minute more-
why did u wake me, you **** w**re?
For "if i die before i sleep"
in my life-all will be achieved.
Please, let me wear white,
and let me hold roses-they're my favourite.
but Please, dont cry,
when i wish to die.
For i'm begging myself to end it today
and let me keep the razor-ok?
Copyright ©
ashleigh4
... [
2003-01-19 14:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on
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Re: please.....
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by M on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 11:38:43 AM AEST
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| I love your poems, ashleigh, their really good. i know exactly what you mean, keep writing! |
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Re: please.....
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by M on
Monday, 20th January 2003 @ 11:39:17 AM AEST
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| I love your poems, ashleigh, their really good. i know exactly what you mean. keep writing! |
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Re: please.....
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 08:31:08 PM AEST
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I think that this poem is one of ur best. So far at least. I luv ur poems. Keep on posten them
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