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Don't...
Contributed by
Kie-Kie
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Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:36:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Don't look at me
Don't say hello
Don't smile when I pass
Just let me go
Don't think of what might have been
Don't tell me you want to know
Don't ignore what you have
Just let me go
Let me go, let me go
Let me walk out that door
Let me act like this never happened
Like I don't love you anymore
Don't think of me
Don't delay what must be so
Don't ask me if I still love you
Just let me go
Let me go, let me go
Let me walk out that door
Let me act like this never happened
Like I don't love you anymore
Don't make me laugh
Don't think that this can grow
Don't kiss me in the rain
Just let me go
Let me go, let me go
Let me walk out that door
Let me act like this never happened
Like I don't love you anymore
Don't grab my hand
Don't tell me "no"
Don't look into my eyes like that
Don't let me go...
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Kie-Kie
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Re: Don't...
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by FleurdeSang on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:46:14 PM AEST
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Wow.... that last line made my gut flip, my heart cry, and my eyes well up with tears...
I know how you feel, sweetie... I think many can relate... *Massive huggles*. A beautiful and sad melody of a love that is withering... defiant, yet reckless... You tell him to let you go, but another part of you doesn't want to leave his warm embrace... Elegant, and heart-wrenching... Thanks so much for sharing, cheri. I hope things will get better... and if not... then I hope the problem will be resolved. You have many friends here, honey... including me, and you can talk to me whenever you like. I'm always here for you. *Warm hugs and smoochies* All my love. Forever,
Your dear friend/avid fan,
~*Stephy*~ (P.S.- You'll be seeing more of me, ;-). Lerve ya!) |
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Re: Don't...
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 12:33:03 AM AEST
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great poem kie keep up the good work . . .
((((kie))))
Ben |
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Re: Don't...
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:17:10 AM AEST
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| woa deep very deep. |
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Re: Don't...
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by inoc on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 02:58:18 AM AEST
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A write- yes- so deep...
take care....
hang in there...
nice write straight from the heart
coni
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Re: Don't...
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by guiltycircles on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 03:47:11 AM AEST
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| awesome write, its so hard to walk away when you know you have to...you expressed the need to leave but the pain it is causing you |
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Re: Don't...
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by remote on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 03:49:07 AM AEST
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| All the while I was reading this "Let me go, let me go" I was just reading that as a deafening screams of "don't let me go". Simply beautiful and such heartfelt last line just reaffirmed that. |
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Re: Don't...
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by fielding88 on
Saturday, 8th October 2005 @ 08:17:08 PM AEST
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| You've got a really good write here Kie, and wouldn't you know it i'm going through the exact same thing, except i'm on the other side of it, and it's kind of frustrating. I love how you wrote this, and I could easily see this put to music somehow. Nevertheless excellent write, I can really relate. |
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Re: Don't...
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 09:41:08 PM AEST
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Kiela my heart cries for u. I can so much feel all of ur emotions through every word. May u have the strength to move on. It'll be painful and heart breaking, but time will heal ur wounds sweet girl. A poem that tugs at the heart with sadness.
*heartfelt hugs to u Kiela*
Sue |
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Re: Don't...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 21st October 2005 @ 01:07:14 AM AEST
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such a commanding man you ahd there, you want I should "take care" of him -_o
In all seriosulness, which you should know by now I havn't got a lot of, this was great! I am impreesed that somone so young could get this emotion out! YOu are beyound your years!
pretty sad though, btu I like that, somtimes. |
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Re: Don't...
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by slogan on
Wednesday, 7th December 2005 @ 11:25:31 PM AEST
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| great write...jh |
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