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In You
Contributed by
weepingprophet
on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:04:26 PM in AEST
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cold hard truth
where are you?
locked up, the muse
chest aching
heart breaking
all i have ever been
locked up, in you
the used
and the cold hard truth is
where are you?
relapse into belief
you've taken the best of me
and the truth remains
i'll be the same
the same tragic mess
the same hollow madness
locked up
abused
and the cold hard truth
is always
slapping, relapsing into
you and where
but here
i am the same
self-inflicted pain
i've always been
always will
remain
in you
and waiting
Copyright ©
weepingprophet
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2005-10-07 15:04:26]
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Re: In You
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:33:54 PM AEST
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very edgy and extremely well written. I especially like
the last stanza... but the entire piece was great!
keep up the cold hard truth. |
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Re: In You
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by lostrelic on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:55:05 PM AEST
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nice write with a great flow
r.m.wilder |
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Re: In You
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:26:18 PM AEST
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Wow. A powerful write. I liked this very much! Your words
evoke strong emotions. Looking forward to more....
~Breezy |
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Re: In You
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 03:09:18 AM AEST
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| incredible write, keep up the great work |
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Re: In You
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by Sicone on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 10:41:04 PM AEST
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| Wow...Its is really nice, seriously. |
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