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goodbye
Contributed by
jheng
on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 01:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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just when one starts to love,
suddenly must learn to forget.
just when one starts to care,
suddenly be indifferent again.
just when one starts to need,
suddenly find oneself alone.
just when one starts to trust,
suddenly be afraid again.
just the same,
the hurting doesnt stop,
the pain never cease,
the tears start to flow
as loneliness sets in.
but nothing
can be done anymore,
but accept
how painful goodbye is.
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jheng
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2005-10-07 13:13:34]
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Re: goodbye
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 09:15:20 PM AEST
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Poignant write.
Yes it is true that the vicissitudes of life make for cruel detachments whenever we think we have attained to something and hold onto it.
I think it is the learning process we all have to go through.
Hardly embraced, - and "let go".
But that is how we are steeled and become strong.
Sad and very poignant write.
Thanks for sharing |
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Re: goodbye
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by Nightingale on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 01:57:38 AM AEST
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| Beautiful write.. U let go of your feelings and express them clearly |
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