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i luv u
Contributed by
jheng
on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:30:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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i love you, i really do
but i dont know how to reach you,
dont know how to be close to you,
and be a friend to you.
i was naive to even think
& hope that miracles happen
for what i need is a miracle
for you to love me again.
i mourn for a love that never was,
a dream that will never come true,
a wish that will never be granted,
a hope that will never happen.
i love you, its what my heart says,
& until the love i feel fades,
i shall continue to hope & pray,
that someday, somehow,
you'll love me too.
Copyright ©
jheng
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2005-10-07 12:30:45]
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Re: i luv u
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by Nightingale on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:47:50 PM AEST
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| Nice write.. Hope to read more |
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Re: i luv u
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by slayer_015 on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:50:31 PM AEST
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That was a very beautiful write.
Good work!!!!!!!
Brian |
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Re: i luv u
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by In_a_while on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 03:39:05 PM AEST
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very longing and full of love...i thought all the stanzas
were strong and was especially taken by the last one.
keep it up! |
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