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Pieces
Contributed by
darkscorpio
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Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 11:30:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Feel the sickness rise inside
I try to be the one standing in the middle all civil
Try and try to keep it together
All the while I’m bleeding to death inside
Why….you want me to show you?
How….ask again and you’ll see
Why can’t I love inside like you…
Wrong again, cause I’m damaged from hatred
The wall comes tumbling down..and I’m raw from emotion
I don’t care if you blame me, or trust me, or love me…all our pieces are broken
I can feel all the scars peeling back, making tears bleed down my face again
Will you remember this pain….as I reach out and crush you
All the while….I want to feel the love like you….
But I can’t , can't forgive and it’s over…
The past comes tumbling out…and all that’s left of me is empty
I don’t care if you hate me, blame me or love me…all is lost, and I’m broken
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Re: Pieces
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:01:28 PM AEST
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I can relate but he never knew I was broken.
Hang tuff.
huggs, strength,
emy |
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Re: Pieces
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by Nightingale on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:21:57 PM AEST
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| So sad!!! |
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Re: Pieces
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 12:36:45 PM AEST
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to be broken... the worst thing to be. this writing is a fav. of mine now.. can't wait for more.
-Crystal- |
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Re: Pieces
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by jheng on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 01:11:25 PM AEST
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nice poem, hoping to read more |
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Re: Pieces
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by Kie-Kie on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:27:39 PM AEST
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Wow... this is just so sad... I do hope it was only a poem
If you ever need someone I'm here *hugs*
Love ya,
~Kiela~ |
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