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Consumed By Her
Contributed by
daprdan
on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 08:44:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My soul flutters still from the fire of one gentle kiss
While I unthreaded the harsh memory of others
She busily stitched her love throughout my heart
The touch of her skin, so soft,
It became overpowering
No... An irresistible abyss
As I watched her slumber that night
I felt a warmth radiate through me
Her spirit so irresistible and domineering
As to be onerous to my senses and...
That could I be consumed by her
I would...
For being only just a part of her virtue
Would be worth the value of loosing myself
To her, my Healingspirit
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daprdan
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2005-10-07 08:44:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Consumed By Her
(User Rating: 1 ) by Caged Soul on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 10:44:07 AM AEST (User
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Can't say that I relate, but that is because I aint never felt a love like this before.
And reading this, I feel kinda deprived that I have not felt love like this before.
You really get to the root of your emotions and this reflects in the structure of the poem, creating a sence of organized disorientation.
All the best to you and your other half.
Keep that soul fire burning!
~souLBro~ |
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