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The Tide
Contributed by
Fernanda_F_Rocha
on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:54:38 AM in AEST
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The wave elevates the prow
And you
You let Yourself go
Arising, always arising
You are enchanted with the mirage
And the wave rises You very high
Throwing Your feet foam crystals
You breath deep
You enjoy every second
The magic, the power
They are strong emotions
And you forget what is back
The tide changes
The prow is quickly going down
Making to follow you it
Letting to feel new sensations
It is emptying of everything
It is the fall
It is the end of the illusion
It is passing of the equator
For the north pole
Again
The tide changes
The prow arises again
Leaving you back
By Fernanda F. Rocha
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Fernanda_F_Rocha
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2005-10-07 05:54:38]
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Re: The Tide
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by remote on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 07:35:30 AM AEST
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Re: The Tide
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 05:57:18 PM AEST
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Hmmm an interesting piece. I will be pondering the significance of the capitals and then lack of in the "you" as I follow the rises and falls. A d/s significance, perhaps?
Nicely written, it reminds me of the cycles we all go through in life. |
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